Sunset Roost
mud ooze
holds mangrove trees,
herons soar, great egrets,
at dusk returning flocks of red-
scarlet ibis
This is inspired by Marian over at Imaginary Gardens with Real Toads who taught us about Cinquains on the weekend and is offered today for Open Link Monday. I visited the Caroni Swamp in Trinidad yesterday to see this remarkable sight.
holds mangrove trees,
herons soar, great egrets,
at dusk returning flocks of red-
scarlet ibis
This is inspired by Marian over at Imaginary Gardens with Real Toads who taught us about Cinquains on the weekend and is offered today for Open Link Monday. I visited the Caroni Swamp in Trinidad yesterday to see this remarkable sight.
holy crow, Mary, that video is startlingly amazing! did you take that video yourself? i think i would faint straight away if i were in the presence of such magnificence!
ReplyDeletei love your cinquain... and am pleased that you linked your writing of this pretty form with such an incredible sight.
your photo at the top of your blog is gorgeous, too. wow!
I found the video on You Tube and the sight of these vividly red birds glinting in the setting sun as they return to the roost was awe inspiring. On the island we watched there were about 3,000 birds. I enjoyed working with this form, Marian.
Deletep.s. The photo on my blog is a view from my balcony in Italy.
Deletewonderful flying flowers n your video, flashing birds in your poem!
ReplyDeleteYes, they looked like poinsettias as they landed against the green.
DeleteTruly.
ReplyDeleteStunning video, and your cinquin does it full pictorial justice. Nice job of eicorporating the nature element, while working a strong visual image.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Hedge. I knew I had to write about it after seeing this incredible sight. I liked what you did with the form by expanding it.
DeleteThat is an amazing sight. We have old African ibis here which are awfully dull in comparison.
ReplyDeleteThese are pink to begin with and then they eat a river crab with red claws that turn them bright red in 2 1/2- 3 years- gorgeous!
DeleteHow wonderful that you can post this video to your blog so others can see this amazing sight!
ReplyDeleteThe advantage of blogging.
DeleteI had heard of these birds but never seen them, even on a video. They are a sight to see.
ReplyDeleteIn person, the sun caught them brightening the red even more. Took my breath away.
DeleteI didnt know such beautiful scarlet birds existed. Such a wonderful video - thank you so much! It must be amazing to see this in person.
ReplyDeleteThe first few dozen to return together caused a collective ahhhhh among the observers.
DeleteNice... great egrets sounds good together.
ReplyDeleteIt's their actual names and it was the first time I saw them. They also roost on the island with the scarlet ibis and provide a lovely contrast.
DeleteSuch wonder in this world! I have never heard of the beautiful scarlet ibis. So grateful to see what you saw. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAnd your cinquain serves as perfect narration.
Thanks, Kim. I had heard of them but not seen them in any numbers. Nothing could prepare me for this magnificent sight, however.
Deletewow...what a cool trip...enjoyed your video...beautiful bird, and your poem accentuates it nicely....
ReplyDeletewow...what a cool trip...enjoyed your video...beautiful bird, and your poem accentuates it nicely....
ReplyDeleteEven the kids on the tour liked the return of the ibis in such great numbers.
DeleteIncredible. Just beautiful. Lovely poem too. But whoa - that is amazing. k.
ReplyDeleteI didn't mean not to emphasize how lovely your poem is - it's just that those birds have to be seen to be believed I think. Unbelievable. k.
ReplyDeleteI quite agree actually; I wasn't prepared for how stunningly beautiful a sky full of these ibis would be.
DeleteWow. Just awesomely stunning. Loved both your cinquain and the video. And where you live is so gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThanks- glad you stopped by.
DeleteWow is right. You are really lucky to see these things.
ReplyDeleteI count myself as lucky indeed, Sally.
DeleteThe video reminds me of being in Costa Rica....Beautiful video and words.
ReplyDeleteI haven't been to Costa Rica but I understand that it is beautiful as well.
DeleteThis fits perfectly into the scene at the Sunderbans in India.. I am amazed by how vivid a description you gave with such economy of words. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks and I'm glad you stopped by.
DeleteCan they be real? (of course they are) What a sight! And how lovely:
ReplyDeleteat dusk returning flocks of red-
scarlet ibis
They're real alright, all 3,000 of them providing such a sight!
DeleteHow splendid to see a video to accompany the beauty of your poem. I loved both.
ReplyDeleteI was pleased to find this video on You Tube since it's difficult to imagine how vivid these birds are.
DeleteYou brought a bit of Trinidad to me today .... thank you! Ahhhh.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful bit. It is my pleasure to do so. Thanks for stopping by.
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