Showing posts with label full moon. Show all posts
Showing posts with label full moon. Show all posts

02 September 2012

Phases




Full moon shone light
on the balcony last night,
heat shimmers wavered
from earth that's summer baked,
lights of a far off city flickered
between bright and faint glimmer.

The air felt rooted,
somehow expectant.
For what? I lost concord
with moon force
when body alliance moved
to sun's heat from moon's cool.

Am I kept marooned, bereft
of this forty year connection,
left to find fresh ways to ferret
earth wisdom? I search, detect
accords unknown, now emerged
with deeper light, shifted yet effulgent.


I experimented with the form of this poem based on a prompt at the beginning of August and posted it as Moon Phases. This is the original poem inspired again by the full, blue moon.
(photo from google images)

03 August 2012

Moon Phase




heat shimmers wavered
full moon shone bright
earth that's summer baked
from the balcony last night

full moon shone bright
lights of a far off city flickered
from the balcony last night
between bright and faint glimmer

lights of a far off city flickered
the air felt rooted
between bright and faint glimmer
somehow expectant

The air felt rooted
I've lost concord
somehow expectant
with moon force

I've lost concord
when body alliance moved
with moon force
in sun's heat from moon's cool

when body alliance moved
I'm kept marooned, bereft
in sun's heat from moon's cool
this forty year connection left

I'm kept marooned, bereft
to find fresh ways to ferret
this forty year connection left
earth wisdom I search, detect

to find fresh ways to ferret
accords unknown, now emerged
earth wisdom I search, detect
with deeper light, shifted yet effulgent

accords unknown, now emerged
earth that's summer baked
with deeper light, shifted yet effulgent
heat shimmers wavered


This post is in response to dVerse Poets prompt from Samuel Peralta in Form For All: Pantoum. He has great examples and directions on how to do this difficult but challenging type of poetry.
(photo from Google Images)